The specific Pacific (Alejandro Moctezuma, Alba Hysaj, Arlind Kukaj)

Did you know that the earth is 70% made of water and in that 70% we only explored 5% of it?Come join us as we dive in to the pacific ocean following all kinds of creatures and organisms. With the pacific being the biggest ocean you’re bound to find a whole new world filled with: at least 40 different species of whales, sharks roaming about, coral reefs and sea kelp and many different ecosystems all in the pacific ocean.

Ocean pollution (Alejandro Moctezuma, Alba Hysaj, Arlind Kukaj)

We have chosen to do option 2 a collaborative research project discussing ocean pollution. It will cover the different kinds of pollutions that are done to the oceans such as: plastic’ Oil spills’ junk and many others. With the change in ocean life since pollution began till now with effects noted from each kind of pollution. As well as the way that the ocean will be like if things dont change how it will end up.

Crystal Rodwell
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“With the change in ocean life since pollution began till now with effects noted from each kind of pollution. As well as the way that the ocean will be like if things dont change how it will end up.”

Both of these are fragments. Work together to clean up the language so that you are making direct statements.

Ocean pollution (Alejandro Moctezuma, Alba Hysaj, Arlind Kukaj)
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We have chosen to do option 2 a collaborative research project discussing ocean pollution. It will cover the different kinds of pollutions that are done to the oceans such as: plastic’ Oil spills’ junk and many others. The ocean has been polluted for several years already and has destroyed many of the fishes and sea creatures ecosystems. Some plastics are made from fossil fuels are over a century old and still in the ocean. In the next 30 years seafood could become extinct.

group plan: research on ocean floor, ocean life, humans, pollution done to ocean

Alba Hysaj
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Proposal Pitch Revised: We are collaborating on a research project discussing ocean pollution and what can be done to improve it. Oceans cover 71 percent of the globe, and they are as important to us as they are vast. Unfortunately, the oceans are in trouble- the plastics made of fossil fuels are over a century old and still in the ocean and the dead zones with no fish life are growing each year. As we know already, the oceans not only provide a livelihood to marine life including healthy seafood for humans, they also play a central role in regulating our climate and absorbing carbon dioxide. We are going to identify practical solutions and find useful information that answers our question: How changing the way we think about waste will keep it out of the ocean?

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